My son’s hand trembles as I lead him towards the bright opening of the cave. As we pass the other villagers – dark-eyed cowards hiding in the shadows – they paint stained-glass smiles on their faces, millimeters above their mocking jeers. We march to the beat of laughter.
I gaze back over my toughened shoulder at the shelters of onyx rock. A new dawn breaks from the mouth of the cave. My wife already stands near a towering palm with my infant daughter. Forward, we walk out into the forest, away from the darkness of the cave, leaving everyone behind.
Thanks for the heads up. MS Word counted my two hyphenated words as one each.
"We march to the beat of laughter" – my favorite! Can be takes so many ways – quickly, stammering, etc. So much is said in 100 words…esp. the last few, "leaving everyone behind." It begs the question and leaves the reader wanting more.
Megan