Bamboo Shoots Submission for

The Shack

Posted on by Fred Peyer

Nursing my beer at the Shack in Mililani, watching

Quiet screens with lost men chasing balls

As lost as the men sipping beer in the half-light

Unsuccessfully trying to bury their hangovers

Longing eyes glued on waitresses derrieres

While upstanding citizens leave church across the street

Just another Sunday morning

Prompt: February Year of the Rat Writing Contest Prompts — 50 words exactly

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