Comments on "I Can See It in their Eyes"
The most difficult link
The links are getting harder to write. So many directions to take, so many voices to do. The number of choices is daunting. I also felt that I was repeating myself using the color green. I couldn't think of a different color! I also wished to italicize some words, but after several tries, I gave…
This poem is written through Grace’s (Thalia's mother) point of view. After reading Stannard’s book, I wrote a poem about Grace’s reaction to the hung jury. In creating this poem, I wanted to include Grace’s strong will to convince others that these men should be held in prison. I also wanted to include many of…
When Jean ended on the line if the walls could talk, I immediately went to either Thalia or Grace (Thalia's mother). The connotation of walls talking would be of scandal and it made me think of Thalia living it up and missing her party life back home on the east coast. There were three things…
Imagine what was going on in the jury room.
Christy, Ann and Juliet are flinging their links at me!
Interaction between Christy and me from the Renshi site
Don't remind me. But yes, it's up, and yes, I know what I said . . . . For those new to this blog, I had previously begged for at least two weeks to finish a poem, and here I am finishing the poems before one week is even up, and Jean, you should take…
Jean and Christy hold an exchange concerning Christy's link. Available elsewhere in pieces.